This book was kindly sent to me for review by the author. Thank you.
Broken Moon follows Naiya, a young girl with a mysterious future ahead of her. She and her two brother encounter some interesting new friends while on the run from the society they grew up in. This story reads very much like a dystopian novel with some science fiction aspects. I’ll begin with what I liked about this book.
It’s very fast paced. It took me three days to read, if I didn’t have to work it would be finished in a day. The characters are constantly moving and there are new characters being introduced all the time. I felt like I was reading loads within a relatively short period of time. Pacing is a big thing with me in books, if it’s too slow I will automatically DNF (did not finish) the book no matter how great if it’s too slow. There was a lot to take in!
But this is where I found a lot of issues for me in the book. Starting with there being so much to take. I like that there is so much going on within the story, but there are loose ends everywhere. Another topic or problem is introduced without one being finished. There also isn’t a lot of detail explaining the new topics so you are left a bit confused for a few chapters. I kept reading excited to find out what all these things the character were discovering were and how they were going to play into the plot and I didn’t get as much of that as I wanted. The copies of the people that are being made is very interesting and I can see how that may blend with the concept of Terminus which seems to be this dimension between life and death, but I wish there was more details so we can theorize where the plot is going, how a war is going to happen in a place like that and what our main characters have to do with all of it. Now obviously this is going to be a series, there is no way all those loose ends are just going to sit there without further explanation. That makes me happy.
Details. I wanted more details the entire time. I felt like everything was explained only to the bare minimum. Clues, new info the characters picked up, fight and chase scenes, the stand offs and even the setting. I’m a big setting person, I want to be submerged in the story with the characters and world building is how I do it. Basically all that was explained is that everything is metal and everything goes up. The rich live on the bottom the poor in the top. And the wall surrounding the city, I understand that’s a big thing with science fiction and dystopian novels. Being trapped in your city and encountering outsiders at some point. But there is so much more to be done with the dystopian concept. The idea of dystopian is a fallen utopian society. So why does every fallen society have to have this wall? It’s driving me crazy! I feel like it limits the story and makes it blend in with all the other books in the genre. Give me something that stands out.
Another thing that bothered me was there was very little character development. The only development was Naiya becoming aware of this power she possesses. Not growing into it, which I did like that the author didn’t rush that. But there was no personal development for Naiya. She already is the “perfect character” she doesn’t need to develop confidence or determinations because she has them already. Her only character flaw seemed to be that she has a strange crush on the main male character Enoch who is her adoptive brother. I was excited for this to be told from a sibling perspective so her crush kind of weirded me out for awhile but the love story was not the center focus of the story which is fantastic!
Overall I gave this book a 3/5 Stars. I enjoyed where the story is going and hold out hope for future books. I am curious to find out where all these loose ends will go and how the characters play into the strange ongoings.
As always, thank you for reading my rambles and until next time,